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As published
86 Facilitation offences: territorial scope
(1) A person who does an act mentioned in section 82, 83, 84 or 85 does not commit an offence under that section unless condition A, B, C, D or E is satisfied.
(2) Condition A is satisfied if he does the act in the United Kingdom or external waters.
(3) Condition B is satisfied if he does the act in a British-registered ship or British-registered aircraft while it is not in or over the United Kingdom or external waters.
(4) Condition C is satisfied if, in a case where—
(a) neither condition A nor condition B is satisfied, but
(b) the broadcasts in question are made, or are to be made, from a structure or other object (which is not a ship or aircraft) in waters in a designated area,
he does the act on that structure or other object within those waters.
(5) Condition D is satisfied if, in a case where—
(a) neither condition A nor condition B is satisfied, but
(b) the broadcasts in question are made, or are to be made, from a ship in contravention of section 79(1),
he does the act in that ship within an area of the high seas that is prescribed for the purposes of section 79.
(6) Condition E is satisfied if—
(a) he is a British person; and
(b) he does the act on or over the high seas.
Your change, as a redline
86 Facilitation offences: territorial scope
(1) A person who does an act mentioned in section 82, 83, 84 or 85 does not commit an offence under that section unless condition A, B, C, D or E is satisfied.
(2) Condition A is satisfied if he does the act in the United Kingdom or external waters.
(3) Condition B is satisfied if he does the act in a British-registered ship or British-registered aircraft while it is not in or over the United Kingdom or external waters.
(4) Condition C is satisfied if, in a case where—
(a) neither condition A nor condition B is satisfied, but
(b) the broadcasts in question are made, or are to be made, from a structure or other object (which is not a ship or aircraft) in waters in a designated area,
he does the act on that structure or other object within those waters.
(5) Condition D is satisfied if, in a case where—
(a) neither condition A nor condition B is satisfied, but
(b) the broadcasts in question are made, or are to be made, from a ship in contravention of section 79(1),
he does the act in that ship within an area of the high seas that is prescribed for the purposes of section 79.
(6) Condition E is satisfied if—
(a) he is a British person; and
(b) he does the act on or over the high seas.
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