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As published
148 Commencement
(1) Section 60 comes into force at the end of the period of two months beginning with the day on which this Act is passed.
(2) The provisions of Chapter 3 of Part 5 come into force in accordance with provision made by the Lord Chancellor or the Secretary of State by order.
(3) The provisions of Part 6 come into force, except as provided by subsection (4), in accordance with provision made by the Secretary of State by order.
(4) The provisions of Part 6 come into force, in so far as they extend to Scotland, in accordance with provision made by the Scottish Ministers by order.
(5) The remaining provisions of this Act, except sections 53, 55, 56, 57, 145, 147, 149, this section and Schedule 11, come into force in accordance with provision made by the Lord Chancellor by order.
(6) An order under this section may make different provision for different purposes.
(7) The power to make an order under this section is exercisable by statutory instrument.
Your change, as a redline
148 Commencement
(1) Section 60 comes into force at the end of the period of two months beginning with the day on which this Act is passed.
(2) The provisions of Chapter 3 of Part 5 come into force in accordance with provision made by the Lord Chancellor or the Secretary of State by order.
(3) The provisions of Part 6 come into force, except as provided by subsection (4), in accordance with provision made by the Secretary of State by order.
(4) The provisions of Part 6 come into force, in so far as they extend to Scotland, in accordance with provision made by the Scottish Ministers by order.
(5) The remaining provisions of this Act, except sections 53, 55, 56, 57, 145, 147, 149, this section and Schedule 11, come into force in accordance with provision made by the Lord Chancellor by order.
(6) An order under this section may make different provision for different purposes.
(7) The power to make an order under this section is exercisable by statutory instrument.
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