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As published
135 Financial provisions.
(1) The Secretary of State shall pay all remuneration, allowances or other sums payable under this Act to or in respect of persons who are or have been members of the Advisory Committee . . ., and shall defray—
(a) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(b) to such amount as the Secretary of State with the approval of the Minister for the Civil Service may determine, all other expenses duly incurred by the Advisory Committee . . .
(2) There shall be defrayed out of moneys provided by Parliament—
(a) all expenses incurred by the Secretary of State in consequence of the provisions of this Act;
(b) any expenses incurred in consequence of those provisions by any other Minister of the Crown or government department, not being a Northern Ireland department;
(c) the remuneration of, and any travelling or other allowances payable under this Act to, the Director and any staff of the Director, any other sums payable under this Act to or in respect of the Director, and any expenses duly incurred by the Director or by any of his staff in consequence of the provisions of this or any other Act;
(d) any increase attributable to this Act in the sums payable out of moneys so provided under the Superannuation Act 1972.
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Your change, as a redline
135 Financial provisions.
(1) The Secretary of State shall pay all remuneration, allowances or other sums payable under this Act to or in respect of persons who are or have been members of the Advisory Committee . . ., and shall defray—
(a) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(b) to such amount as the Secretary of State with the approval of the Minister for the Civil Service may determine, all other expenses duly incurred by the Advisory Committee . . .
(2) There shall be defrayed out of moneys provided by Parliament—
(a) all expenses incurred by the Secretary of State in consequence of the provisions of this Act;
(b) any expenses incurred in consequence of those provisions by any other Minister of the Crown or government department, not being a Northern Ireland department;
(c) the remuneration of, and any travelling or other allowances payable under this Act to, the Director and any staff of the Director, any other sums payable under this Act to or in respect of the Director, and any expenses duly incurred by the Director or by any of his staff in consequence of the provisions of this or any other Act;
(d) any increase attributable to this Act in the sums payable out of moneys so provided under the Superannuation Act 1972.
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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