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194A Inspection and copies
(1) The NRBW must provide reasonable facilities for inspecting the main river map for Wales in electronic form.
(2) The NRBW must on request provide any person with—
(a) a hard copy of all or part of the map, or
(b) data comprising all or part of the map in electronic form.
(3) The NRBW may charge a fee for providing a copy or data under subsection (2), but the fee—
(a) must, in the case of a person appearing to the NRBW to have requested a copy or data for commercial purposes, represent a reasonable usage fee, and
(b) in any other case, may not exceed the reasonable costs of providing the copy or data.
(4) The NRBW must on request provide a body mentioned in the first column of the following table with a hard copy of, or data comprising, such part of the main river map for Wales as is described in the second column of the entry for that body.
A local authority in Wales | The part that relates to the local authority's area
An internal drainage board for an internal drainage district that is wholly or partly in Wales | The part that relates to its district, so far as that district is in Wales
A water company that exercises functions in relation to an area in Wales | The part that relates to that area
A highway authority that exercises functions in relation to highways in Wales | The part that relates to the area in Wales in relation to which it exercises functions
A navigation authority that exercises functions in relation to an area in Wales | The part that relates to that area
(5) The Documentary Evidence Act 1868 has effect as if—
(a) the NRBW were mentioned in the first column of the Schedule to that Act;
(b) any member of the staff of the NRBW authorised to act on behalf of the NRBW were specified in the second column of the Schedule to that Act in connection with the NRBW;
(c) the regulation referred to in that Act included the main river map for Wales kept by the NRBW;
(d) references to a copy included references to a print-out of information kept in electronic form.
Your change, as a redline
194A Inspection and copies
(1) The NRBW must provide reasonable facilities for inspecting the main river map for Wales in electronic form.
(2) The NRBW must on request provide any person with—
(a) a hard copy of all or part of the map, or
(b) data comprising all or part of the map in electronic form.
(3) The NRBW may charge a fee for providing a copy or data under subsection (2), but the fee—
(a) must, in the case of a person appearing to the NRBW to have requested a copy or data for commercial purposes, represent a reasonable usage fee, and
(b) in any other case, may not exceed the reasonable costs of providing the copy or data.
(4) The NRBW must on request provide a body mentioned in the first column of the following table with a hard copy of, or data comprising, such part of the main river map for Wales as is described in the second column of the entry for that body.
A local authority in Wales | The part that relates to the local authority's area
An internal drainage board for an internal drainage district that is wholly or partly in Wales | The part that relates to its district, so far as that district is in Wales
A water company that exercises functions in relation to an area in Wales | The part that relates to that area
A highway authority that exercises functions in relation to highways in Wales | The part that relates to the area in Wales in relation to which it exercises functions
A navigation authority that exercises functions in relation to an area in Wales | The part that relates to that area
(5) The Documentary Evidence Act 1868 has effect as if—
(a) the NRBW were mentioned in the first column of the Schedule to that Act;
(b) any member of the staff of the NRBW authorised to act on behalf of the NRBW were specified in the second column of the Schedule to that Act in connection with the NRBW;
(c) the regulation referred to in that Act included the main river map for Wales kept by the NRBW;
(d) references to a copy included references to a print-out of information kept in electronic form.
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