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As published
109 Employment of women and young persons in places other than factories in processes connected with lead manufacture or involving the use of lead compounds.
The following provisions of this Act, that is to say:—
(a) the provisions relating to the employment of women and young persons in certain processes connected with lead manufacture and in processes involving the use of lead compounds;
(b) the provisions requiring notification to be sent to the chief inspector, or to the inspector for the district, of lead poisoning contracted or occurring in factories; and
(c) any provision relating to powers and duties of inspectors and to offences, penalties and legal proceedings;
shall apply to employment in any such processes as aforesaid in any place other than a factory, as if the place were a factory and the employer were the occupier of the factory, and as if the references to young persons included references to all persons who had not attained the age of eighteen.
Your change, as a redline
109 Employment of women and young persons in places other than factories in processes connected with lead manufacture or involving the use of lead compounds.
The following provisions of this Act, that is to say:—
(a) the provisions relating to the employment of women and young persons in certain processes connected with lead manufacture and in processes involving the use of lead compounds;
(b) the provisions requiring notification to be sent to the chief inspector, or to the inspector for the district, of lead poisoning contracted or occurring in factories; and
(c) any provision relating to powers and duties of inspectors and to offences, penalties and legal proceedings;
shall apply to employment in any such processes as aforesaid in any place other than a factory, as if the place were a factory and the employer were the occupier of the factory, and as if the references to young persons included references to all persons who had not attained the age of eighteen.
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