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As published
114 Posting of abstract of Act and notices.
(1) There shall be kept posted at the principal entrances of a factory at which employed persons enter—
(a) the prescribed abstract of this Act; and
(b) a notice of the address of the inspector for the district and the superintending inspector for the division; and
(c) a notice of the name and address of the examining surgeon for the factory; and
(d) a notice specifying the clock (if any) by which the period of employment and intervals for meals and rest in the factory are regulated; and
(e) every notice and document required by this Act to be posted in the factory:
Provided that an inspector may direct that all or any of the aforesaid documents shall be posted in such parts of the factory, either in addition to or in substitution for the said principal entrances, as he may direct.
(2) All such documents shall be posted in such characters and in such positions as to be conveniently read by the persons employed in the factory and, if a form has been prescribed for any document, it shall be posted in that form.
(3) If any person pulls down, injures or defaces any abstract, notice, regulations or other document posted in pursuance of this Act, he shall be guilty of an offence and liable to a fine not exceeding five pounds.
Your change, as a redline
114 Posting of abstract of Act and notices.
(1) There shall be kept posted at the principal entrances of a factory at which employed persons enter—
(a) the prescribed abstract of this Act; and
(b) a notice of the address of the inspector for the district and the superintending inspector for the division; and
(c) a notice of the name and address of the examining surgeon for the factory; and
(d) a notice specifying the clock (if any) by which the period of employment and intervals for meals and rest in the factory are regulated; and
(e) every notice and document required by this Act to be posted in the factory:
Provided that an inspector may direct that all or any of the aforesaid documents shall be posted in such parts of the factory, either in addition to or in substitution for the said principal entrances, as he may direct.
(2) All such documents shall be posted in such characters and in such positions as to be conveniently read by the persons employed in the factory and, if a form has been prescribed for any document, it shall be posted in that form.
(3) If any person pulls down, injures or defaces any abstract, notice, regulations or other document posted in pursuance of this Act, he shall be guilty of an offence and liable to a fine not exceeding five pounds.
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