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As published
45 Amendment of Dramatic and Musical Performers' Protection Act, 1925
In the Dramatic and Musical Performers' Protection Act, 1925,—
(a) after section one there shall be inserted the two sections set out in Part I of the Sixth Schedule to this Act; and
(b) after section three there shall be inserted the two sections set out in Part II of that Schedule;
and the provisions of that Act specified in Part III of that Schedule shall have effect subject to the amendments set out in relation thereto in the second column of the said Part III (being minor amendments of that Act and amendments consequential upon the insertion therein of the sections referred to in paragraphs (a) and (b) of this section).
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45 Amendment of Dramatic and Musical Performers' Protection Act, 1925
In the Dramatic and Musical Performers' Protection Act, 1925,—
(a) after section one there shall be inserted the two sections set out in Part I of the Sixth Schedule to this Act; and
(b) after section three there shall be inserted the two sections set out in Part II of that Schedule;
and the provisions of that Act specified in Part III of that Schedule shall have effect subject to the amendments set out in relation thereto in the second column of the said Part III (being minor amendments of that Act and amendments consequential upon the insertion therein of the sections referred to in paragraphs (a) and (b) of this section).
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