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80 Contents of claim notice
(1) The claim notice must comply with the following requirements.
(2) It must specify the premises and contain a statement of the grounds on which it is claimed that they are premises to which this Chapter applies.
(3) It must state the full name of each person who is both—
(a) the qualifying tenant of a flat contained in the premises, and
(b) a member of the RTM company,
and the address of his flat.
(4) And it must contain, in relation to each such person, such particulars of his lease as are sufficient to identify it, including—
(a) the date on which it was entered into,
(b) the term for which it was granted, and
(c) the date of the commencement of the term.
(5) It must state the name and registered office of the RTM company.
(6) It must specify a date, not earlier than one month after the relevant date, by which each person who was given the notice under section 79(6) may respond to it by giving a counter-notice under section 84.
(7) It must specify a date, at least three months after that specified under subsection (6), on which the RTM company intends to acquire the right to manage the premises.
(8) It must also contain such other particulars (if any) as may be required to be contained in claim notices by regulations made by the appropriate national authority.
(9) And it must comply with such requirements (if any) about the form of claim notices as may be prescribed by regulations so made.
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80 Contents of claim notice
(1) The claim notice must comply with the following requirements.
(2) It must specify the premises and contain a statement of the grounds on which it is claimed that they are premises to which this Chapter applies.
(3) It must state the full name of each person who is both—
(a) the qualifying tenant of a flat contained in the premises, and
(b) a member of the RTM company,
and the address of his flat.
(4) And it must contain, in relation to each such person, such particulars of his lease as are sufficient to identify it, including—
(a) the date on which it was entered into,
(b) the term for which it was granted, and
(c) the date of the commencement of the term.
(5) It must state the name and registered office of the RTM company.
(6) It must specify a date, not earlier than one month after the relevant date, by which each person who was given the notice under section 79(6) may respond to it by giving a counter-notice under section 84.
(7) It must specify a date, at least three months after that specified under subsection (6), on which the RTM company intends to acquire the right to manage the premises.
(8) It must also contain such other particulars (if any) as may be required to be contained in claim notices by regulations made by the appropriate national authority.
(9) And it must comply with such requirements (if any) about the form of claim notices as may be prescribed by regulations so made.
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