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As published
35 Power to supply water fittings.
(1) Scottish Water may, on the request of any person to whom it supplies or proposes to supply water, supply to him any such water fittings as are required or allowed by its byelaws and may, on such request, install, repair or alter (but not manufacture) any such water fittings, whether supplied by it or not, and may provide any materials and do any work required in connection with installation, repair or alteration of water fittings.
Scottish Water may make such charges as may be agreed, or in default of agreement as may be reasonable, for any fittings supplied, or any materials provided or work done under this subsection, and may recover such charges.
(2) If any fittings supplied otherwise than by sale by Scottish Water bear either a distinguishing plate affixed thereto, or a distinguishing brand or other mark conspicuously impressed or made thereon, sufficiently indicating Scottish Water as the actual owners of the fittings, those fittings—
(a) shall, notwithstanding that they fixed to some part of the premises in which they are situated or that they be laid in the soil thereunder, continue to be the property of, and removable by, Scottish Water ; and
(b) shall not be subject to any diligence or to the landlord’s hypothec for rent, or be liable to be taken under any process of law or in any proceedings in bankruptcy against the persons in whose possesion they may be.
(3) Nothing in subsection (2) shall affect the valuation for rating of any lands and heritages.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(5) If any person—
(a) so interferes with a meter used by Scottish Water in determining the amount of any charges fixed in relation to any premises as intentionally or recklessly to prevent the meter from showing, or from accurately showing, the volume of water supplied to those premises; or
(b) carries out, without the consent of Scottish Water , any works which he knows are likely to affect the operation of such a meter or which require the disconnection of such a meter; or
(c) otherwise wilfully or negligently injures or suffers to be injured any water fitting belonging to Scottish Water ,
he shall be guilty of an offence and liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 3 on the standard scale.
Your change, as a redline
35 Power to supply water fittings.
(1) Scottish Water may, on the request of any person to whom it supplies or proposes to supply water, supply to him any such water fittings as are required or allowed by its byelaws and may, on such request, install, repair or alter (but not manufacture) any such water fittings, whether supplied by it or not, and may provide any materials and do any work required in connection with installation, repair or alteration of water fittings.
Scottish Water may make such charges as may be agreed, or in default of agreement as may be reasonable, for any fittings supplied, or any materials provided or work done under this subsection, and may recover such charges.
(2) If any fittings supplied otherwise than by sale by Scottish Water bear either a distinguishing plate affixed thereto, or a distinguishing brand or other mark conspicuously impressed or made thereon, sufficiently indicating Scottish Water as the actual owners of the fittings, those fittings—
(a) shall, notwithstanding that they fixed to some part of the premises in which they are situated or that they be laid in the soil thereunder, continue to be the property of, and removable by, Scottish Water ; and
(b) shall not be subject to any diligence or to the landlord’s hypothec for rent, or be liable to be taken under any process of law or in any proceedings in bankruptcy against the persons in whose possesion they may be.
(3) Nothing in subsection (2) shall affect the valuation for rating of any lands and heritages.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(5) If any person—
(a) so interferes with a meter used by Scottish Water in determining the amount of any charges fixed in relation to any premises as intentionally or recklessly to prevent the meter from showing, or from accurately showing, the volume of water supplied to those premises; or
(b) carries out, without the consent of Scottish Water , any works which he knows are likely to affect the operation of such a meter or which require the disconnection of such a meter; or
(c) otherwise wilfully or negligently injures or suffers to be injured any water fitting belonging to Scottish Water ,
he shall be guilty of an offence and liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 3 on the standard scale.
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