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As published
§ 16. Enampakkumine
(1) Enampakkumise tehingu tõestamisel loetakse osalejaiks üksnes need pakkujad, kes jäävad oma pakkumise juurde.
(2) Kui selline osaleja lahkub enne enampakkumise lõppu, ei kohaldata tema suhtes käesoleva seaduse § 13 lõiget 1 juhul, kui notar märgib tema lahkumise notariaalakti.
Your change, as a redline
§ 16. Enampakkumine
(1) Enampakkumise tehingu tõestamisel loetakse osalejaiks üksnes need pakkujad, kes jäävad oma pakkumise juurde.
(2) Kui selline osaleja lahkub enne enampakkumise lõppu, ei kohaldata tema suhtes käesoleva seaduse § 13 lõiget 1 juhul, kui notar märgib tema lahkumise notariaalakti.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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