Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
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As published
§ 30. Peibutusvahendi kasutamine
(1) Peibutusvahendina võib uluki ligimeelitamiseks kasutada kuju, lõhnapreparaati ja uluki häälitsust järeleaimavat vahendit, välja arvatud elektroonilist vahendit.
(2) Peibutusvahendina ei tohi kasutada elusat looma.
Your change, as a redline
§ 30. Peibutusvahendi kasutamine
(1) Peibutusvahendina võib uluki ligimeelitamiseks kasutada kuju, lõhnapreparaati ja uluki häälitsust järeleaimavat vahendit, välja arvatud elektroonilist vahendit.
(2) Peibutusvahendina ei tohi kasutada elusat looma.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
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