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58B Variation of conditions on approval or consent
(1) This section applies where the Commission grant, subject to conditions, an application under section 58A for their approval or consent.
(2) The Commission may, on an application to them by the person who applied for the approval or consent (the “original applicant”), modify the conditions imposed by—
(a) varying a condition;
(b) removing a condition;
(c) adding a condition,
as they consider appropriate.
(3) Where the Commission so modify conditions they must, before the expiry of the period of 14 days beginning with the day on which they do so, give notice of their decision to—
(a) the original applicant;
(b) any other person who was given written notification under section 58A(12A) of the decision to grant the approval or consent subject to conditions; and
(c) any other person the Commission consider has a relevant interest.
(4) Subject to subsection (5), subsections (2) to (5A), (16) and (17) of section 58A apply to an application under subsection (2) of this section as they apply to an application under subsection (1) of that section.
(5) Where the original applicant is an executor who applied under section 10(4A) for consent to divide a croft under section 9, subsections (3) to (5A), (16) and (17) do not apply.
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58B Variation of conditions on approval or consent
(1) This section applies where the Commission grant, subject to conditions, an application under section 58A for their approval or consent.
(2) The Commission may, on an application to them by the person who applied for the approval or consent (the “original applicant”), modify the conditions imposed by—
(a) varying a condition;
(b) removing a condition;
(c) adding a condition,
as they consider appropriate.
(3) Where the Commission so modify conditions they must, before the expiry of the period of 14 days beginning with the day on which they do so, give notice of their decision to—
(a) the original applicant;
(b) any other person who was given written notification under section 58A(12A) of the decision to grant the approval or consent subject to conditions; and
(c) any other person the Commission consider has a relevant interest.
(4) Subject to subsection (5), subsections (2) to (5A), (16) and (17) of section 58A apply to an application under subsection (2) of this section as they apply to an application under subsection (1) of that section.
(5) Where the original applicant is an executor who applied under section 10(4A) for consent to divide a croft under section 9, subsections (3) to (5A), (16) and (17) do not apply.
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