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Change 1
As published
108 Extension of provisions of Act outside United Kingdom.
(1) Her Majesty may by Order in Council direct that any of the provisions of this Act, other than the provisions of sections 34, 35, 61(3) to (5), 82, and 88 of this Act, shall extend, with such modifications (if any) as may be specified in the Order to any relevant overseas territory.
(2) Her Majesty may by Order in Council direct that—
(a) any provision of this Act, other than a provision of sections 92 to 95; or
(b) any provision of any Order in Council or regulations made by virtue of section 60, . . ., 75, 86, 87 or 89 above,
shall apply in relation to an aircraft registered in any relevant overseas territory as that provision applies to an aircraft registered in the United Kingdom, but with such modifications (if any) as may be specified in the Order.
Your change, as a redline
108 Extension of provisions of Act outside United Kingdom.
(1) Her Majesty may by Order in Council direct that any of the provisions of this Act, other than the provisions of sections 34, 35, 61(3) to (5), 82, and 88 of this Act, shall extend, with such modifications (if any) as may be specified in the Order to any relevant overseas territory.
(2) Her Majesty may by Order in Council direct that—
(a) any provision of this Act, other than a provision of sections 92 to 95; or
(b) any provision of any Order in Council or regulations made by virtue of section 60, . . ., 75, 86, 87 or 89 above,
shall apply in relation to an aircraft registered in any relevant overseas territory as that provision applies to an aircraft registered in the United Kingdom, but with such modifications (if any) as may be specified in the Order.
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