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69 Periodical publication of CAA’s policies.
(1) It shall be the duty of the CAA to publish from time to time a statement of the policies it intends to adopt in performing its functions under sections 64 to 68 above.
(2) If the Secretary of State considers it appropriate to do so, he may by notice in writing require the CAA to publish a statement of the policy it intends to adopt with respect to any particular matter in performing the functions mentioned in subsection (1) above (or any of them); and it shall be the duty of the CAA to publish any statement required by a notice under this subsection within six months of the date of the notice.
(3) Before publishing any statement under this section the CAA shall consult such persons as appear to it to be representative respectively—
(a) of the civil air transport industry of the United Kingdom; and
(b) of users of air transport services.
(4) The manner of publication of any statement under this section shall be as the CAA may determine.
Your change, as a redline
69 Periodical publication of CAA’s policies.
(1) It shall be the duty of the CAA to publish from time to time a statement of the policies it intends to adopt in performing its functions under sections 64 to 68 above.
(2) If the Secretary of State considers it appropriate to do so, he may by notice in writing require the CAA to publish a statement of the policy it intends to adopt with respect to any particular matter in performing the functions mentioned in subsection (1) above (or any of them); and it shall be the duty of the CAA to publish any statement required by a notice under this subsection within six months of the date of the notice.
(3) Before publishing any statement under this section the CAA shall consult such persons as appear to it to be representative respectively—
(a) of the civil air transport industry of the United Kingdom; and
(b) of users of air transport services.
(4) The manner of publication of any statement under this section shall be as the CAA may determine.
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